All you need strapline

  • Estado: Closed
  • Premio: £40
  • Propuestas recibidas: 5
  • Ganador: kidsstorywriter

Resumen del concurso

I'm looking for a strapline to describe that we sell 1000s of products to portray the message that we're a one-stop shop for everything that you could possibly need in a business.

'everything you need for your workplace in one place'

The strapline needs to be only a few words.

Our company sells everything from office furniture, ladders, truck & trolley to catering equipment, cupboards and lockers and catering equipment.

Our company website is www.key.co.uk if you'd like see see more about what we can offer our customers.

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“@kidsstorywriter won the contest on 10 May 2017”

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  • Pepsibo1982
    Organizador del concurso
    • 7 años atrás

    The ones I have rejected have been for following reasons
    - they concentrate on office supplies, this is only a small part of our business and we sell industrial products.
    - the language/grammar wasn't quite right

    • 7 años atrás
    1. aaronlowcy
      aaronlowcy
      • 7 años atrás

      Are you looking to award runner-up entries too?

      • 7 años atrás
    2. DeepakBalana38
      DeepakBalana38
      • 7 años atrás

      Strap Line of one of the worlds biggest company "McDonald's: "I'm Lovin' It , the language/grammar isn't good still this tagline is loved by everyone :) All the best for your future business. Thanks

      • 7 años atrás
  • DeepakBalana38
    DeepakBalana38
    • 7 años atrás

    provide the feedback for entries give a kind look at Entry #19 , Entry #20, Entry #22 for the further improvements as its a good business practice thanks

    • 7 años atrás
    1. Pepsibo1982
      Organizador del concurso
      • 7 años atrás

      As I mentioned below we're not an office supplier, this is why I have rejected these ones

      • 7 años atrás
  • DeepakBalana38
    DeepakBalana38
    • 7 años atrás

    Entry #21, I would like to say after seeing the rating that you have provided that the tagline or strap line should not be simple sentence describing in simple words what you do. it must be catchy and having humor in itself. feature of tagline writing 1. It's memorable. 2. It includes a key benefit 3. It imparts positive feelings about the brand 4. just see the all the big company tag line viz. Nike: "Just Do It" Apple: "Think Different" BMW: "The Ultimate Driving Machine" Audi:"Advancement Through Technology"McDonald's: "I'm Lovin' It" so these all are having humor not just the simple sentence. it was my feedback so please go through my tagline again hope you will find all the qualities in my tagline which i have mentioned above. we are professional and give best service to our client after so much of research on task. thanks Feed me back

    • 7 años atrás
  • vivekdaneapen
    vivekdaneapen
    • 7 años atrás

    Please take a look at each entry and validate

    • 7 años atrás
  • vivekdaneapen
    vivekdaneapen
    • 7 años atrás

    You can still provide feedback and you will receive updated strap lines as messages. Without feedback nobody knows exactly which direction you are looking forward to

    • 7 años atrás
    1. Pepsibo1982
      Organizador del concurso
      • 7 años atrás

      ok, thank you, i will work through and provide feedback

      • 7 años atrás
  • Pepsibo1982
    Organizador del concurso
    • 7 años atrás

    Apologies for not giving any feedback, I'm new to this site and still figuring out how to use it.

    • 7 años atrás
  • aaronlowcy
    aaronlowcy
    • 7 años atrás

    Dear Sir, we would appreciate if you could kindly review and rate our entries. Thanks

    • 7 años atrás
  • aaronlowcy
    aaronlowcy
    • 7 años atrás

    Dear Sir, would appreciate if you could kindly review and rate our entries. Thanks

    • 7 años atrás
  • DeepakBalana38
    DeepakBalana38
    • 7 años atrás

    give a kind look at Entry #19 , Entry #20, Entry #21, Entry #22

    • 7 años atrás
  • aaronlowcy
    aaronlowcy
    • 7 años atrás

    Kindly review entry #27 . Thanks

    • 7 años atrás
  • shaunaks2
    shaunaks2
    • 7 años atrás

    Kindly go through entry #2

    • 7 años atrás

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