All you need strapline

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Ganador: kidsstorywriter

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I'm looking for a strapline to describe that we sell 1000s of products to portray the message that we're a one-stop shop for everything that you could possibly need in a business.

'everything you need for your workplace in one place'

The strapline needs to be only a few words.

Our company sells everything from office furniture, ladders, truck & trolley to catering equipment, cupboards and lockers and catering equipment.

Our company website is www.key.co.uk if you'd like see see more about what we can offer our customers.

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“@kidsstorywriter won the contest on 10 May 2017”

Pepsibo1982, France.

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Organizador del concurso
- 6 años atrás
The ones I have rejected have been for following reasons
- they concentrate on office supplies, this is only a small part of our business and we sell industrial products.
- the language/grammar wasn't quite right
- 6 años atrás
1. aaronlowcy
  - 6 años atrás
  Are you looking to award runner-up entries too?
  - 6 años atrás
2. DeepakBalana38
  - 6 años atrás
  Strap Line of one of the worlds biggest company "McDonald's: "I'm Lovin' It , the language/grammar isn't good still this tagline is loved by everyone :) All the best for your future business. Thanks
  - 6 años atrás
DeepakBalana38
- 6 años atrás
provide the feedback for entries give a kind look at Entry #19 , Entry #20, Entry #22 for the further improvements as its a good business practice thanks
- 6 años atrás
1. Organizador del concurso
  - 6 años atrás
  As I mentioned below we're not an office supplier, this is why I have rejected these ones
  - 6 años atrás
DeepakBalana38
- 6 años atrás
Entry #21, I would like to say after seeing the rating that you have provided that the tagline or strap line should not be simple sentence describing in simple words what you do. it must be catchy and having humor in itself. feature of tagline writing 1. It's memorable. 2. It includes a key benefit 3. It imparts positive feelings about the brand 4. just see the all the big company tag line viz. Nike: "Just Do It" Apple: "Think Different" BMW: "The Ultimate Driving Machine" Audi:"Advancement Through Technology"McDonald's: "I'm Lovin' It" so these all are having humor not just the simple sentence. it was my feedback so please go through my tagline again hope you will find all the qualities in my tagline which i have mentioned above. we are professional and give best service to our client after so much of research on task. thanks Feed me back
- 6 años atrás
vivekdaneapen
- 6 años atrás
Please take a look at each entry and validate
- 6 años atrás
vivekdaneapen
- 6 años atrás
You can still provide feedback and you will receive updated strap lines as messages. Without feedback nobody knows exactly which direction you are looking forward to
- 6 años atrás
1. Organizador del concurso
  - 6 años atrás
  ok, thank you, i will work through and provide feedback
  - 6 años atrás
Organizador del concurso
- 6 años atrás
Apologies for not giving any feedback, I'm new to this site and still figuring out how to use it.
- 6 años atrás
aaronlowcy
- 6 años atrás
Dear Sir, we would appreciate if you could kindly review and rate our entries. Thanks
- 6 años atrás
aaronlowcy
- 6 años atrás
Dear Sir, would appreciate if you could kindly review and rate our entries. Thanks
- 6 años atrás
DeepakBalana38
- 6 años atrás
give a kind look at Entry #19 , Entry #20, Entry #21, Entry #22
- 6 años atrás
aaronlowcy
- 6 años atrás
Kindly review entry #27 . Thanks
- 6 años atrás
shaunaks2
- 6 años atrás
Kindly go through entry #2
- 6 años atrás