Tattoo modification on an already made tattoo

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Good day! I hope you like the idea I submitted. I'd love if you can tell me if I'm going in the right direction with this since I very much appreciate feedback from my client so I can give them best results and make sure they're satisfied with what they pay for. Thank you for reading my message, best regards and I hope you find your winner! Format : AI, EPS, PSD, JPG, PNG, PDF