I am reworking a website for a client and he needs better copy writing. This will be a combination of rewriting existing copy and creating some new copy. We would like to have the following copy from his home page rewritten to reflect a new direction, and needs to have a more dynamic verbiage that entices the visitors to stay and take action.
I will probably select a couple writers to take a shot at it and see which style he likes best. To get a sense of his business and see if you are interested in this kind of project you can visit <[login to view URL]>
Here is the copy from his home page to be rewritten.
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We invite you to discover Reflections Medspa where you will find the highest levels of service and efficacy for non-invasive skin and body aesthetics as well as cosmetic surgical procedures. With only Registered Nurses and Physicians performing your procedure using state of the art equipment, you can expect the most effective treatment results available. Now you can get access to the products that medical professionals prescribe for their clients at Reflections Medspa.
This site is intended to provide you with the best combination of products to repair, maintain, and enhance your skin. The Physicians and Nurses of Reflections Medspa have developed this site in conjunction with their renowned medspa to help people worldwide improve the health and appearance of our clients through the use of medically proven products and therapies. The products we offer have been extensively researched for their medical properties. We know the key to our success is the combination of our professional training and our relationship with you, our client.
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