Dear Mr. Fitch
My bid to redo your website would include redesign where necessary. I think we could come up with a much more professional look. I feel that your current website style doesn't reflect the kind of work you do. This would be my first job through freelancer.com, so I am not exactly sure how long it would take me to complete. If you need it by yesterday, I am not your man. But if you have some time, I am sure I can deliver you an awesome site.
Thank you,
Mitch Handsone