CustomJob - TillyJean - €35 - Medium Editing

Right, here we go again: This time, you only need to tear down parts of it, here's what I was thinking: 1. look for unusual phrases (e.g. "days of yore" or "apropos to this issue", i.e. things that easily pop on a plagiarism test) and paraphrase them 2. look for passages that are "too smooth" (i.e. that differ a bit from the rest of the text and could therefore be direct citations or something along those lines) and paraphrase them 3. edit for cohesion/typos/tense mistakes 4. depending on time go through it again and change at least a bit in every sentence, as usual to prevent possible plagiarism that I don't know about Freaking group projects. I'm glad to be done with this. Assignment 1 is already attached Assignment 2 will be uploaded by Sunday noon Deadline: Sunday 22:00 London time PRESERVE WORD COUNT!