I need suggestion for my Landing Page. Only Copywriter apply!

My copy writing skills are below : Hi Future Partner, I read your post and understood your needs about doing a sales funnel copy writing. Let me introduce my self - My name is Abhishek and I am a copywriter. I used to run marathons and understand the principle of perseverance and hard work. I apply them when I sit down to do Copy writing. I write until I achieve ' awesomeness ' in my copy which delivers the intended message to the reader with an apt call to action. Here is a landing page I designed for Raccoon Data : www.raccoondata.co. I use LEADPAGES to make the sales landing pages. I have delivered all my project due in time as I strongly respect and adhere deadlines. This is my plan of action : Day 1 - Research about your target group and your service Day 1 - First Draft Day 2 - 2 revisions Day 3 - Final Copy Let me know your thoughts on this copy as well as way forward. -Cheers Abhishek PS: I practice copywriting as a profession - I am new to Freelancer.com thus no reviews. :) Stay assured of quality. PPS : If you are reading this post reading the whole message then - Congratulations !! You just read an awesome piece of copywriting. :)

sales page copy I am an experienced copywriter with a good understanding of creating unique sales copies for companies. I can help you create an engaging and effective sales copy. Please open chat to get started. Thanks